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16 August 2005 @ 09:45 pm
Consequences  
I wrote this for [info]loveneverdead
Godric/Salazar slash.
PG-13.


Godric glittered. He was a small sun, orbited by gaggles of admiring women and sycophantic men. It made Salazar sick to look at him. This was Salazar's idea of the ninth circle of Hell. Certainly, he had his own admirers, though they generally arrayed themselves wherever Salazar was enthroned. They were as gaudy and as shameless as Godric's... followers, but at least they would never have the audacity to claim that they were Slytherin's friends.

Godric would accept and adopt the lot of them. He never saw the disgusting way their eyes lit up as they watched him, never for a second suspected the calculation that hid behind their breathless compliments...

Salazar ground his teeth. When someone offered him another goblet of some rich ruby liquid, he accepted, and fantasized briefly that it was the blood of those sheep.

It does no good to continue to watch him. He will be at this all night. They love him. He loves to be loved.

Slytherin turned back toward his ring of hangers-ons. His sharp-featured, gaunt face caught the light. Grey eyes glinted coldly. Conversation faltered under his expression, then shifted tack and began again. Salazar held court in glacial silence.


The scent of beeswax and burnt cotton was thick in the air. The candles had dimmed and guttered. The party had stretched long, and most of its machinery long-since returned to the warmth of their beds,- or somebody else's.

Godric Gryffindor, disheveled and laughing, wove his way through the velvets and upended goblets of the vanished festivities. His golden hair,transformed to the finest amber by the radiant reddish glow of the candles, swept his broad shoulders. His beard perfectly suited the strong square jaw and the smiling mouth. He had a face to melt the heart of angels... and he smelled of someone else.

Salazar Slytherin had a good sense of smell, but it would not have taken an expert to recognize the scent of women. His lip curled. He should have known. He sipped more wine, enjoying the crisp bite upon his tongue and the heavy coldness of the jeweled metal against his mouth. He stared at the pattern of tiles upon the floor and tried not to breathe in the cloying, mixed smells of Godric and that woman.

It made him hurt.

"Did you enjoy yourself, Salazar?"

The man was talking to him. The besotted, overly-innocent, heroic slut was talking to him. Was he too drunk to read the signs? Was he masochistic? But that voice was warm and deep and sent Salazar's blood to a frenzy.

"Did I enjoy myself? You touched someone else tonight."

He'd spoken Parseltongue. It was a velvet whip, a verbal laceration. He turned and stared coldly into Godric's golden eyes as he said it. Gryffindor did not understand, but he flinched anyway. Salazar liked it. He rose to his feet like a silk-robed shark approaching through bloodied water.

"If it's about Honoria--"

"Was that her name?"

Godric's brows drew together. His voice deepened, on the brink of danger. "I don't like it when you use the past tense like that, Salazar. I wonder what you're planning."

"As if your sword-blade mind could possibly comprehend my plans!"

"Honoria just needed some comfort. Her father is sick--"

"Did she tell you that?"

"Do you think I read it off her like a map?"

"It is a possibility, certainly. Godric, you are impossibly naive."

"Not everyone is as twisted as you are, Salazar."

Those words hung in the air. They sizzled, they danced. The two men stared at each other. They were of a height: Godric broad and muscular, Salazar thin as a rail.

Salazar smiled. His smile was slow and started at the corner of his lips. It spread like blood from a wound, incarnated into something rare and cruel.


"And no practical definition of freedom would be completely without the freedom to face the consequences."


"You know I didn't mean that." In the darkness of his room, Godric's hair sparked like treasure in a cavern. He laid his large hand against Salazar's cheek. The palm was broad, warm and callused. Salazar allowed the touch, and allowed the kiss that followed. The kiss was as strong and as wild as everything was about Gryffindor, but it was also apologetic.

And inside, Slytherin burned with cold fury.

He bit Godric's lower lip sharply.

"S'blood!" Gryffindor pulled away, touching his fingertips to his mouth. They came away dark with something. Salazar licked his lips.

"I said I was sorry. I didn't mean it."

"Perhaps," said Salazar, "it only matters to me that you said it. And don't compound your lie with a third utterance. It is hardly chivalric."

Godric stared at him quietly. The moonlight danced in his large brown eyes. "Is there an apology you will accept?"

Salazar stared at him, then gently smoothed a finger over Godric's cut lip. "Go and wash the scent of that woman off you. Return. Lie down with me."

"Yes, Salazar, of course I will--"

Slytherin closed his fist in Godric's golden hair and pulled him back, just as the larger man had begun to rise. "Tonight you will call me Lord Slytherin... until you have earned back the privelege of my given name. And Godric..."

"Yes?" There was a tension in that sentence, a low growl. Godric despised it when Salazar was cruel.

"I will not be gentle."
 
 
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Under Lucius[info]underlucius on August 17th, 2005 12:27 pm (UTC)
*wibbling with glee*

This is wonderful! The power crackles like electricity! And the language is lovely too, giving an old world feel.

And the end... *gah*

*recs*
camp, yet ruthless: drow[info]malefics on August 17th, 2005 06:57 pm (UTC)
OMG! You have no idea the rush it gave me that you liked this. I was uncertain about it, but I love the characters and working with them. More to come. :)
Mairi Nathaira (테라-찬 / テラちゃん)[info]aigooism on August 17th, 2005 12:58 pm (UTC)
Came via Underlucius.

Dude. That fic was ... so much tension in it. Wow. I'm floored by it. I love how you describe their outer appearance, and I love how you characterised them. I love Salazar here!
camp, yet ruthless: beauty[info]malefics on August 17th, 2005 06:57 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
Foxymoron[info]rosie_red73 on August 17th, 2005 07:13 pm (UTC)
Here via [info]underlucius's rec.

That was brilliant. I think this might be the first founders fic I've ever read and I loved it.

Mind if I friend you?
camp, yet ruthless[info]malefics on August 17th, 2005 07:18 pm (UTC)
I don't in the slightest! You should also run down to [info]loveneverdead and check us out. The rest of August is "Hogwarts Founders" month so there should be quite a bit more fun with the boys and girls.

You could get into it if you wanted. ;)
Foxymoron[info]rosie_red73 on August 18th, 2005 08:15 pm (UTC)
Oooh! thanks, I'll have a look. I'm kind of in need of a fresh injection of inspiration, so maybe I just will get into it!

Consider yourself friended! *grin*

Caleb or C[info]glass_wishes on August 17th, 2005 10:00 pm (UTC)
I will only say this.....I want m o r e......yes yes....give me more until my cup runneth over and the wine stains the sheets like blood....
camp, yet ruthless[info]malefics on August 18th, 2005 12:32 am (UTC)
Plenty more coming. xD Nice to see you here, bebbe.
Caleb or C[info]glass_wishes on August 18th, 2005 12:34 am (UTC)
I follow my nose to excellent writing...yes yes...too bad I don't get into writing fanfic myself or I'd write something...but...well...::whispers:: I haven't read any of the Potter books...I find out about them through others...and audio books. Besides...I like the naughty stuff better....
Keeper of the Superfluous Es!: LuciusFuck[info]themostepotente on August 17th, 2005 11:39 pm (UTC)
S'funny, I was wondering if anyone had ever written Godric/Salazar fic, and here it is!

Wonderful.

--P
camp, yet ruthless[info]malefics on August 18th, 2005 02:39 am (UTC)
Thanks so much!
Keeper of the Superfluous Es![info]themostepotente on August 18th, 2005 07:53 am (UTC)
Hope to see more of the same. Friended you.
zinaya: Coffee Wench[info]zinaya on August 18th, 2005 04:24 am (UTC)
Here via [info]underlucius, and I'm so glad she found you!

I love this fic. Both Salazar and Godric are great and I love your use of language. Great Founders fic is hard to find! :D
camp, yet ruthless: drow[info]malefics on August 18th, 2005 05:03 am (UTC)
Thank you! I aim to please. More to come, on com and off it.
Kaleidoscope Eyes[info]august_showers on August 18th, 2005 06:22 am (UTC)
Oh, Godric/Salazar! I didn't even know that I was itching to read this till you wrote it. And you've written it so brilliantly that I can't imagine it any other way. I LOVED the ending and the imagery in your descriptions of the two men is beautiful.

Just a nitpick, but you've misspelled "dishevelled" and "privilege". Not that that takes away from the brilliance of your writing in any way.
camp, yet ruthless[info]malefics on August 18th, 2005 06:35 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the nitpicks too. I can only blame my Francophilia for dishevelled. ;)
Amanuensis: bringbacktheporn[info]amanuensis1 on August 19th, 2005 06:38 pm (UTC)
Oh, god. This is heel-drummingly sexy. Those last five paragraphs, god. I love it.
camp, yet ruthless[info]malefics on August 20th, 2005 01:58 am (UTC)
Thank you!
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